These two wise owls are soaring high in the sky, enjoying the wind and the freedom of flight. The kite they are holding is vivid orange with a crisp, sunny yellow stripe. It flutters in the air as they gaily tug on the kite string, spinning in circles. Birds of various colors zigzag across the bright blue sky and white clouds drift by.
To give this page added life, I would start by adding in some texture and various shades of blue for the sky. Next, the kite could be colored in a bright layer of orange followed by the yellow stripe, adding in subtle shadows and highlights to keep it from looking too flat. The owls should be given a bit of fluff, using some light browns and some beige tones. Add darker colors to the edges to give the feathers a bit of depth. A few splashes of color here and there, like a bit of green foliage, would add a finishing touch, rounding out your picture's visuality.